Monday, January 26, 2009

Poem


DOGS
Dogs are pretty, nice, and sweet.
When they are good, I give them a treat.
Dogs do not like cats.
They chase them around like cats do rats.
They come in all different sizes, shapes, and colors.
They bark when ever they want to hollar.

My poem on dogs is pure genius. It shows that writing a poem the period before its due can really turn out beautifully. Much of my inspiration on this poem came from my friend Kaylie Zollweg. We put our minds together and created this masterpiece. I am proud to say that this is truly the best poem I have ever written.

The first time I ever read "Dogs", I felt tears come to my eyes. I could tell Mr. Ackerman felt the same way by the expression on his face and all of the corrections he wrote. I know he was just trying to help me reach my peak of greatness. Hopefully some day soon I will be able to impress you with another work of art written by yours truly.

My favorite line in this poem would have to be; "They chase them around like cats do rats." This line inspires me to become a greater writer, philospher, and to also learn more about other animals. Even though it rhymes, cats really do chase rats.

I believe the theme of my poem would have to be the describing dogs and their characteristics. After reading this, I am sure you know a lot more than you did before and that is why I chose to write about man's best friend.

Thursday, January 22, 2009

HELLO

Shalom. My name is Kelsey Edwards. I'm currently sitting next to Kaitlyn Bryan, love her. Indeed I am a junior at Northview High School. It's pretty intense here I'm not going to lie. Chicken is my favorite food. That is why Tuesdays and Thursdays tend to be my favorite days of the week. Currently I am suffering from mysophobia. Hand sanitizer happens to be my best friend.

I tend to not be the kindest person in the morning, which is lucky for Mr. Ackerman because I have him sixth period. I wake up around 7:11 every school day and my ride comes around 7:25. This happens to be ample time for me to get ready. Writing is not my forte so I do not really know why I am in this class. 17 years ago this March 6th happens to be the day of my birth. I like it because it's on a Friday this year. Have a wonderful day and I hope you enjoyed my life because I sure do.